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Post by lebeau36 on Oct 9, 2008 8:22:41 GMT -5
Ok, I will be test subject #2.  Here are pencils by Joe Maduriera with my inks. This sample page was done earlier this year (in July). Please feel free to post comments and critiques. Thank u in advance. Pencils -  Inks -  |
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Post by jimmyt on Oct 11, 2008 16:58:48 GMT -5
Very nice control Le Beau,
My only suggestion is to watch line thickness ( One of my weaknesses). In the backgrounds you have kind of thick lines that the eyes are attracted to.
I found setting the furthest point lineweight and then move ahead getting thicker as you go was easier once I outline the closest figure. This way your eye will follow what the artist intends to pop.
Really nice job though, I like it a lot.
Jimmy T
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Post by jalderink on Oct 13, 2008 9:59:44 GMT -5
I'd like to see some smoother transitions of the the feathering into the black, but that's nitpicking. Sweet!
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Post by comixnut on Oct 13, 2008 10:14:19 GMT -5
i'd like to see a larger version but i always ask for that! LOL Great to see you in here LeBeau! |
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Post by clockwerkj on Oct 13, 2008 13:32:35 GMT -5
Hey Lebeau,
You know I almost never say this, but maybe go just a bit thicker on the contours to pop them a bit. Beautiful stuff otherwise. The textures on the brick etc is super sweet.
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