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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 19, 2009 21:12:18 GMT -5
>>> That's how I felt about Angel Medina years ago....I would break my back and spend eons on every page but the results always inspired me to drudge on...some guys like Mike McKone, Don Kramer, Sal Velluto are similar...inker killers <g> I don't even want to attempt a Medina Spawn page.I had gotten one a few years ago,but it was way to light of a copy to even try. |
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 22, 2009 13:40:51 GMT -5
Well here one of the Flash pages Jay was kind enough to post.  Rip into it and tell me what I'm doing wrong. |
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Post by clockwerkj on Aug 23, 2009 10:15:20 GMT -5
hey TOm,
Way to go on staying on top of these. Thats how you get into the business. by hustling constantly on new samples & Improving with each one.WE got new puppies this weekend & I have a monday deadline or I'd have written that full critique for you by now.
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Post by bobalmond on Aug 23, 2009 14:18:03 GMT -5
I agree with Jay, Tom.... promptness and professionalism go a long way!
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 23, 2009 15:09:37 GMT -5
Thanks.I'm just lucky I don't have anything on the table.I should have the second page soon.
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 25, 2009 17:48:15 GMT -5
Here's the other Flash page.  |
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Post by clockwerkj on Aug 25, 2009 18:05:08 GMT -5
I THINK YOU DO GREAT HAIR! At some point I have to sit down & show you all the different ways to do a tree textures. Your trying, but it isn't really hitting the mark. For now go find an x-men essentials with Byrne & austin. THat should answer most issues with trees vs. bushes etc.
J
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 25, 2009 20:24:35 GMT -5
Thanks for the suggestion.
What I need to do is find as many pages with trees and just do them until I puke.
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 29, 2009 21:46:53 GMT -5
Well here's 2 pages I found from Marcio Abreu of Spidey with his other girl. There is one more that I'll have on Monday. Anyway here you go.   You can find the pencils here. marcioabreu7.deviantart.com/Rip into them as much as you want. |
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Post by tschloendorn on Sept 1, 2009 12:04:49 GMT -5
As promised here's the 3rd page.  Now the real question,which of these samples should I include in a sample packet for Pittsburgh,and Baltimore? |
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Post by clockwerkj on Sept 1, 2009 16:22:17 GMT -5
not the second one. Its the weakest pencils. That firswt one shows a willingness to do the boring stuff, but the last one is good. Id consider using both.
J
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Post by tschloendorn on Sept 1, 2009 20:15:15 GMT -5
I love that line"The willingness to do the boring stuff."
Thanks for the tip Jay.
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Post by tschloendorn on Oct 9, 2009 22:06:16 GMT -5
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Post by clockwerkj on Oct 10, 2009 10:25:19 GMT -5
2 quick hits. On rogue, I dont like the boob shadows. Better to leave them off. On the last piece, great white splats, however, those bricks leave me a little flat. The pattern is too much the same. Also, if you are going to do bricks with that much texture then freehand the edges. You could've even not drawn the top (or in this case, bottom) edge & used the texture to define it. You're really coming along quickly.
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Post by tschloendorn on Oct 10, 2009 20:29:26 GMT -5
As always Jay thanks for the tips.
On the boob(I just wanted to type boob) comment that's one of the areas that I wonder if I leave it off will someone say I should have since it's in the pencils or should I have done something different with it to show the form better.
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