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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 5, 2009 8:10:06 GMT -5
Well it's Wednesday and that means new inks. Penciled by Eduardo Garciag.     You can find the pencils here. eduardogarciag.deviantart.com/AS always let me know what you think. Next up at least one of the pages Jay was kind enough to post. |
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Post by clockwerkj on Aug 5, 2009 10:30:17 GMT -5
Good Stuff. Other than to say go a little thicker in a few places this stuff is dead on. U have the Johny DC style nailed.
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Post by bobalmond on Aug 5, 2009 11:57:49 GMT -5
Ditto to what Jay said! ;D
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 5, 2009 14:14:22 GMT -5
Thanks Jay and Bob,hey that sounds like it could be a movie ;D
Anyway back to the boards.
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Post by bobalmond on Aug 5, 2009 15:10:49 GMT -5
Not if I'm supposed to be 'silent' Bob....never work....everyone knows I can't keep quiet;-)
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 5, 2009 19:25:52 GMT -5
But you'll get a few choice lines at every convention.
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 12, 2009 18:02:44 GMT -5
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Post by clockwerkj on Aug 13, 2009 16:06:57 GMT -5
good stuff
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 15, 2009 12:53:19 GMT -5
Thanks Jay. Now you can rip this one apart.  |
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Post by clockwerkj on Aug 17, 2009 17:31:20 GMT -5
THat looks pretty sweet. Next week Im going to post one of his Jungle Scenes. Bet you'll love that. THe 2 big fixes on this page & why I posted it you missed. Panel 2 the ears dont match. One is lower & smaller than the other. Panel 3 the sausage fingers. go back in and recut shadow shapes into them. as they are they look like lil' smokeys. Also might consider a thicker outline on the easel. remember. whatevers in front is the thickest. No excuses. His left arm should be thinner for sure.
J
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 17, 2009 20:23:49 GMT -5
I'll make sure I tweek those areas before I post this anywhere else.
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 18, 2009 20:35:23 GMT -5
Well the ear is still giving me trouble even though I know what's wrong with it.It seems the more I try the more messed up it looks. Anyway here's the updated one.  As an added bonus here's the Ebas page.  As much as I love his stuff I think I would need 2 months to ink one of his books,with all the little details he puts in.I give you guys credit that have a quick turn around on him. |
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Post by clockwerkj on Aug 19, 2009 11:17:15 GMT -5
I think the ears are ok now. At this point if someone saw the pencils they would understand you fixed it. Fingers are good. Corrected arm weight is good. On Ebas. It took me about 16hrs a page to work over him. Granted for me thats just an average work day. It looks pretty good. I dont have any real comments on it at the momnet.
J
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Post by tschloendorn on Aug 19, 2009 16:00:14 GMT -5
Thanks as always Jay.
I also beefed up the easel just slightly and added a halo,which I hate doing,around it to give even more separation to it,and his face in the last panel was thickened ever so slightly.
I guess I'm not as slow with Eric as I thought,it just seems to never end with him,but I love the finished product.
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Post by bobalmond on Aug 19, 2009 21:08:29 GMT -5
>>>I guess I'm not as slow with Eric as I thought,it just seems to never end with him,but I love the finished product.<<<
That's how I felt about Angel Medina years ago....I would break my back and spend eons on every page but the results always inspired me to drudge on...some guys like Mike McKone, Don Kramer, Sal Velluto are similar...inker killers <g>
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