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Post by tschloendorn on Mar 25, 2009 9:02:39 GMT -5
Now see I thought I started a thread before but I guess I didn't. Anyway let's correct that now. Here's some page I recently finished up for samples this year. Penciled by Penciled by heubert khan michael wrathofkhan.deviantart.com/    Pencils can be found at the link above. As always let me know what you think. |
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Post by clockwerkj on Mar 26, 2009 13:24:50 GMT -5
ONly complaint, At this size most of the contours seem to be very similar in weight. relying almost solely on the black shapes to separate. Really good overall presentation. lines appear crisp & direct.
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Post by tschloendorn on Mar 26, 2009 19:50:28 GMT -5
Thanks Jay.
I found it hard to do anything with that to really separate things since I know the character Cloak absorbs light.I really hate using halos,which I did in a few spots on these,because I always reminds me of colorforms.
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Post by tschloendorn on Apr 4, 2009 20:48:50 GMT -5
Here's another set I did up this past week. First up is another pin up from Grant Perkins.  Next is a few sample pages fro the portfolio. Penciled by Yildiray Cinar. cinar.deviantart.com/   Pencils for these can be found at his deviant site. |
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Post by clockwerkj on Apr 6, 2009 2:19:58 GMT -5
last page the bottom right splat is a little to splatty. Either make your splats directional or textural. that is 50/50. For directional try tapping your brush on your finger at various angles. for a more textured effect hold the splatter making object up higher so it rains down. Other than that I got nuthin. That first one is way cute.
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Post by tschloendorn on Apr 6, 2009 7:58:35 GMT -5
Thanks again Jay.
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Post by tschloendorn on Apr 30, 2009 20:38:38 GMT -5
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Post by clockwerkj on May 1, 2009 10:44:46 GMT -5
Simple clean work. What you did is perfect for the adventures line stuff. Keep it up.
Jay
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Post by tschloendorn on May 1, 2009 13:43:48 GMT -5
Thanks as always Jay.
I'd love to get in front of an editor for them.
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Post by clockwerkj on May 3, 2009 11:52:48 GMT -5
If I could help you there I would. Being outside the local NYC area I just dont have that ability. If we are at a con together, I'll see what I can do.
Jay
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Post by tschloendorn on Jul 26, 2009 19:23:50 GMT -5
So here are some sequentials from Yildiray Cinar. cinar.deviantart.com/   As always,let me know what you think. |
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Post by clockwerkj on Jul 27, 2009 14:11:17 GMT -5
Check your email for a stack of goodies. I think the old schoolers I sent you will help. The other stuff was top of the box. I'm not sure its totally appropriate sample material for you, but its a start. When I get time in the next few weeks I'll get you better stuff.
J
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Post by tschloendorn on Jul 28, 2009 17:02:47 GMT -5
I'm not sure if you sent these already but I've got nothing.
Which email did you send them to?
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Post by clockwerkj on Jul 28, 2009 18:59:11 GMT -5
wierd,
I sent them to the address listed in your member profile. The first 2 are on my site now, with more to follow. it was 6 files, & may not have gotten past your mail server due to size?
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Post by tschloendorn on Jul 28, 2009 21:11:50 GMT -5
Yeah I still have nothing from you.
I did snag the ones on your site.
Thanks.
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