Aspiring Comic Book Artist

[ruben23rivera]

Below are a couple of pages I plan on using to start my inking portfolio. Hopefully I'm off to a good start. I obtained the pencils from Dark Horse Comics. Please feel free to share your critiques with me. I would especially love to here from any seasoned professionals out there.

[clockwerkj]

Not bad overall, with your next samples focus on changing lineweights. everything separates ok here, but each line looks as if it were traced over with a #x marker. Outlines done with one & interior lines done with another, & so on. Each line should get thicker & thinner.